Mc Carthy Island

[Óðinn]

you want me to go threw line for line and break the whole thing down?

Dude.... there's a lot in that piece to break down, its not your basic line for line cypher... trust i acknowledge your poetic usage.. but like i've said before (which you for an intelligent man, dont seem to grasp) DUMB IT DOWN... its better to use one metaphor on a line, based on the concept of w/e that line may be... but your putting 4-5 each line an cramming them in to the point were the metaphor's dont matter any more as people are gonna read it an think WTF is all this jumbled up shit?... take my advice, dont take my advice, it dont really matter to me...

But i aint breaking it down for tha fact i aint got the time to break ALL that ish down... i've more important matters to attend to... *like what?* scratching my ball sack for one... lmao nah on the reals tho i aint got time to break that shit down...

[Óðinn]

you want me to go threw line for line and break the whole thing down?

Dude.... there's a lot in that piece to break down, its not your basic line for line cypher... trust i acknowledge your poetic usage.. but like i've said before (which you for an intelligent man, dont seem to grasp) DUMB IT DOWN... its better to use one metaphor on a line, based on the concept of w/e that line may be... but your putting 4-5 each line an cramming them in to the point were the metaphor's dont matter any more as people are gonna read it an think WTF is all this jumbled up shit?... take my advice, dont take my advice, it dont really matter to me...

But i aint breaking it down for tha fact i aint got the time to break ALL that ish down... i've more important matters to attend to... *like what?* scratching my ball sack for one... lmao nah on the reals tho i aint got time to break that shit down...