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Unread 01-28-2012, 02:34 PM
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http://hulkshare.com/e72viiqhrp6g

This is an old verse that I re-recorded, and a new second verse that i've added.
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http://hulkshare.com/e72viiqhrp6g

This is an old verse that I re-recorded, and a new second verse that i've added.
 
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Unread 01-28-2012, 02:46 PM
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I'm feeling it.. mic presence was nice, but the vocals need to be a bit louder. Just gave it a quick listen but there were a few nice lines in there... and I liked the Method Man flow in the very beginning.
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I'm feeling it.. mic presence was nice, but the vocals need to be a bit louder. Just gave it a quick listen but there were a few nice lines in there... and I liked the Method Man flow in the very beginning.
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Unread 01-28-2012, 03:00 PM
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yeah, i've been trying to work on my leveling, and I had some issues that i noticed recording, like I was too far away from the mic, etc. Just some personal things I'll know to work on in the next one. I appreciate it, though, man.

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more feedback, please?
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yeah, i've been trying to work on my leveling, and I had some issues that i noticed recording, like I was too far away from the mic, etc. Just some personal things I'll know to work on in the next one. I appreciate it, though, man.

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more feedback, please?
 
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Unread 01-28-2012, 03:05 PM
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This one> the other one.
Really like it fam, Claaaassick.
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Unread 01-28-2012, 03:05 PM   #4
 
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Unread 01-28-2012, 03:23 PM
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It was a tad more natural this time, i guess. Lol.

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It was a tad more natural this time, i guess. Lol.

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Keep it coming folks.

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Unread 01-28-2012, 03:26 PM
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vocals need to be up more fam....good flow yo
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Yeah, I've noticed, the thing is, I have them up to like 12db gain as is. Lol. It's mostly the distance I was from the mic, it will be fixed in the next track, though. No worries. I was worried about getting right up on the mic, and my vocals getting distorted.

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@Wigsplit @Next Level @GRizzEAT What do you guys think?

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@Anonyme @Prose_ You guys, too. Thoughts?

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@Jason What do you think?

@Mindless I dig the new post added feature in the post blocks. It eliminates the mess of double, and triple, and etc posting. What do you think of this track?

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@Just C Your opinion?
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Yeah, I've noticed, the thing is, I have them up to like 12db gain as is. Lol. It's mostly the distance I was from the mic, it will be fixed in the next track, though. No worries. I was worried about getting right up on the mic, and my vocals getting distorted.

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@Wigsplit @Next Level @GRizzEAT What do you guys think?

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@Anonyme @Prose_ You guys, too. Thoughts?

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@Jason What do you think?

@Mindless I dig the new post added feature in the post blocks. It eliminates the mess of double, and triple, and etc posting. What do you think of this track?

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@Just C Your opinion?
 
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Unread 01-28-2012, 04:01 PM
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http://hulkshare.com/e72viiqhrp6g

This is an old verse that I re-recorded, and a new second verse that i've added.
It's nice. you just need a boost in mic presence as a lot of what you said just passed me by.
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It's nice. you just need a boost in mic presence as a lot of what you said just passed me by.
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