Rhyming Scheme/Flow- tie, both had pretty smooth flow here
Vocabulary- ill go with Dosage here, although xander did not lack either, i believe dosage used a bit more.
Topic/Meaning- tie- i liked both takes on the picture
Storytelling/Progression- dosage had more of a story line to his....
Emotion- tie- both had good emotion here
Imagery- dosage again, he gave better detail
Poetic Techniques-tie, both had good concepts here....
Ending-dosage- xander kinda left me with questions.
mvgt DOSAGE, although it was a close battle imo....good reads from both, i enjoyed yalls takes on this pic
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