TOPICAL TOURNAMENT RD 2: Straight Edge (Loser) vs exZACHly (Winner) 3-0KO

[ozark]

Rhyme scheme/flow- tbh i feel both flowed pretty well with a good rhyme scheme so TIE-
Vocabulary- exzachly got this cata- nothing really stood out as strong vocab imo- but SE verse really didnt need exstensive vocab because of the story-
Topic meaning- i feel EX took this cata- i connected better with his concept and angle of the pic-
story telling progression- S-E got this cata- i liked his story telling ability here while keeping the rhyne scheme.
Emotion- EX got this cata- his verse was deep and i connected well with it-
Imagery- S-E takes this cata due to his good storytelling- EX had good imagery as well-
Poetic technique- EX takes this cata with allthe emotion used- although SE had good ideas as well-
Ending- EX took this cata- i really liked his ending- very deep and just closed his piece very nicely-

Mvgt EX, good drops by both here- but i felt he had a stronger topical meaning with lots of emotion!!!

[ozark]

Rhyme scheme/flow- tbh i feel both flowed pretty well with a good rhyme scheme so TIE-
Vocabulary- exzachly got this cata- nothing really stood out as strong vocab imo- but SE verse really didnt need exstensive vocab because of the story-
Topic meaning- i feel EX took this cata- i connected better with his concept and angle of the pic-
story telling progression- S-E got this cata- i liked his story telling ability here while keeping the rhyne scheme.
Emotion- EX got this cata- his verse was deep and i connected well with it-
Imagery- S-E takes this cata due to his good storytelling- EX had good imagery as well-
Poetic technique- EX takes this cata with allthe emotion used- although SE had good ideas as well-
Ending- EX took this cata- i really liked his ending- very deep and just closed his piece very nicely-

Mvgt EX, good drops by both here- but i felt he had a stronger topical meaning with lots of emotion!!!