Fame - Those Eyes Feat. Dono & Muggz

[FAME]

Originally Posted by Crysis

Dono - Flow sounds forced & odd, seems like every time you try to do faster flows it comes off as such. You have a nasally delivery, so the faster stuff comes off as odd. That, and your rhyming was especially basic in this one (starin'/apparant/wearin/sharin. cute/loose/moves/do games/gaze/change) which significantly contributed to the formulaic aspect of your verse.

Fame - Flow was nice, rhyming was a bit above average with only a few basic areas. Your deliver was on point, too.

Muggz - Rhyming was the best out of the three, so naturally the flow was also good. Delivery was there, and your cadence was confident.

Overall - I wish everyone's verses were a bit longer, as Fame & Muggz only had a few bars in theirs, while Dono went a bit faster so he had more content. The beat was nice, and the hook was great as most Fame hooks are. I don't necessarily bump this type of track often, but this one was executed nicely.

Appreciate the detailed feedback my dude.

LOL @ @Sax describing it as 'Ayo Technology with an Akon twist'

[FAME]

Originally Posted by Crysis

Dono - Flow sounds forced & odd, seems like every time you try to do faster flows it comes off as such. You have a nasally delivery, so the faster stuff comes off as odd. That, and your rhyming was especially basic in this one (starin'/apparant/wearin/sharin. cute/loose/moves/do games/gaze/change) which significantly contributed to the formulaic aspect of your verse.

Fame - Flow was nice, rhyming was a bit above average with only a few basic areas. Your deliver was on point, too.

Muggz - Rhyming was the best out of the three, so naturally the flow was also good. Delivery was there, and your cadence was confident.

Overall - I wish everyone's verses were a bit longer, as Fame & Muggz only had a few bars in theirs, while Dono went a bit faster so he had more content. The beat was nice, and the hook was great as most Fame hooks are. I don't necessarily bump this type of track often, but this one was executed nicely.

Appreciate the detailed feedback my dude.

LOL @ @Sax describing it as 'Ayo Technology with an Akon twist'