Erupt vs Fiji Osa ROUND 2 ERUPT WINS!!

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Voting Rubix

Rhyming Scheme/Flow: TIE one had choppy flow, the other had a simple rhyme scheme.

Vocabulary: TIE both were kinda boring with there usage of the english language.

Topic/Meaning: Erupt had a much better feel for the topic, IMO.

Storytelling/Progression: Erupt stayed much more consistant skill level wise & plot wise.

Emotion: Fiji had a much better feel overall. Slightly better wording in some places made a difference.

Imagery: TIE both got a pretty good picture of the scene. Good work on this from both sides..to close.

Poetic Techniques: Erupt had much better metaphors & described the entire scenery in a poetic manner.

Ending: Erupt was much more exciting throughout the final stanzas..



MVGT - Erupt. He exzibited much better skills then Fiji in this one. Although it was close, Erupt managed to clutch most of the categories...Good battle guys.

[NelSyn]

Voting Rubix

Rhyming Scheme/Flow: TIE one had choppy flow, the other had a simple rhyme scheme.

Vocabulary: TIE both were kinda boring with there usage of the english language.

Topic/Meaning: Erupt had a much better feel for the topic, IMO.

Storytelling/Progression: Erupt stayed much more consistant skill level wise & plot wise.

Emotion: Fiji had a much better feel overall. Slightly better wording in some places made a difference.

Imagery: TIE both got a pretty good picture of the scene. Good work on this from both sides..to close.

Poetic Techniques: Erupt had much better metaphors & described the entire scenery in a poetic manner.

Ending: Erupt was much more exciting throughout the final stanzas..



MVGT - Erupt. He exzibited much better skills then Fiji in this one. Although it was close, Erupt managed to clutch most of the categories...Good battle guys.