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03-18-2012, 04:39 PM
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Thank you, Just C... I have one question. You were talking about our wordplays not connecting: Get You (Exam Pulled) and Knives'll (Terrorist Open Fire) ... Can you give me an example of a worplay connecting to the original line? Because I have seen the likes of RhetoriK, DaDDiO and UA use wordplays that negate your criticism. I'm not hating, I would seriously like to hear an example from you.
Also, you still in text these days? ...
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Thank you, Just C... I have one question. You were talking about our wordplays not connecting: Get You (Exam Pulled) and Knives'll (Terrorist Open Fire) ... Can you give me an example of a worplay connecting to the original line? Because I have seen the likes of RhetoriK, DaDDiO and UA use wordplays that negate your criticism. I'm not hating, I would seriously like to hear an example from you.
Also, you still in text these days? ...
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03-18-2012, 04:49 PM
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Originally Posted by ViTRiOL
Thank you, Just C... I have one question. You were talking about our wordplays not connecting: Get You (Exam Pulled) and Knives'll (Terrorist Open Fire) ... Can you give me an example of a worplay connecting to the original line? Because I have seen the likes of RhetoriK, DaDDiO and UA use wordplays that negate your criticism. I'm not hating, I would seriously like to hear an example from you.
Also, you still in text these days? ... 
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I'm not going to give you an example of what would have worked but the simple fact is like I stated the terrorist line didn't work as a WP as it's second meaning didn't make sense in the context of the line. Read the second meaning. You can see it's just gibberish.
But you can always post Daddio's, UA's and others WP so I can tell you IF and why I think they don't work.
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Talk and Prose next.
Just be patient. Lol each battle takes a minute to vote n feed on.
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03-18-2012, 04:49 PM
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Originally Posted by ViTRiOL
Thank you, Just C... I have one question. You were talking about our wordplays not connecting: Get You (Exam Pulled) and Knives'll (Terrorist Open Fire) ... Can you give me an example of a worplay connecting to the original line? Because I have seen the likes of RhetoriK, DaDDiO and UA use wordplays that negate your criticism. I'm not hating, I would seriously like to hear an example from you.
Also, you still in text these days? ... 
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I'm not going to give you an example of what would have worked but the simple fact is like I stated the terrorist line didn't work as a WP as it's second meaning didn't make sense in the context of the line. Read the second meaning. You can see it's just gibberish.
But you can always post Daddio's, UA's and others WP so I can tell you IF and why I think they don't work.
---------- Post added at 04:49 PM ---------- Previous post was at 04:47 PM ----------
Talk and Prose next.
Just be patient. Lol each battle takes a minute to vote n feed on.
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03-18-2012, 04:55 PM
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Originally Posted by Just C
I'm not going to give you an example of what would have worked but the simple fact is like I stated the terrorist line didn't work as a WP as it's second meaning didn't make sense in the context of the line. Read the second meaning. You can see it's just gibberish.
But you can always post Daddio's, UA's and others WP so I can tell you IF and why I think they don't work.
---------- Post added at 04:49 PM ---------- Previous post was at 04:47 PM ----------
Talk and Prose next.
Just be patient. Lol each battle takes a minute to vote n feed on.
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Fuck it, I'll stick to a cryptic grind. It works for the vets, no-one seems to care about their flaws... Oh wait, that's because people can be the best with a username these days.
I appreciate your feed though Just, honestly.
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03-18-2012, 04:55 PM
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Originally Posted by Just C
I'm not going to give you an example of what would have worked but the simple fact is like I stated the terrorist line didn't work as a WP as it's second meaning didn't make sense in the context of the line. Read the second meaning. You can see it's just gibberish.
But you can always post Daddio's, UA's and others WP so I can tell you IF and why I think they don't work.
---------- Post added at 04:49 PM ---------- Previous post was at 04:47 PM ----------
Talk and Prose next.
Just be patient. Lol each battle takes a minute to vote n feed on.
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Fuck it, I'll stick to a cryptic grind. It works for the vets, no-one seems to care about their flaws... Oh wait, that's because people can be the best with a username these days.
I appreciate your feed though Just, honestly.
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03-18-2012, 05:20 PM
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lol u cryin
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A little.
It is impossible for Just C not to criticise. Dude was funny as fuck during the All Star Text tourney: Multi-selling novelist.
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03-18-2012, 05:20 PM
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lol u cryin
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A little.
It is impossible for Just C not to criticise. Dude was funny as fuck during the All Star Text tourney: Multi-selling novelist.
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03-18-2012, 11:07 PM
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Originally Posted by ViTRiOL
Thank you, Just C... I have one question. You were talking about our wordplays not connecting: Get You (Exam Pulled) and Knives'll (Terrorist Open Fire) ... Can you give me an example of a worplay connecting to the original line? Because I have seen the likes of RhetoriK, DaDDiO and UA use wordplays that negate your criticism. I'm not hating, I would seriously like to hear an example from you.
Also, you still in text these days? ... 
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03-18-2012, 11:07 PM
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Originally Posted by ViTRiOL
Thank you, Just C... I have one question. You were talking about our wordplays not connecting: Get You (Exam Pulled) and Knives'll (Terrorist Open Fire) ... Can you give me an example of a worplay connecting to the original line? Because I have seen the likes of RhetoriK, DaDDiO and UA use wordplays that negate your criticism. I'm not hating, I would seriously like to hear an example from you.
Also, you still in text these days? ... 
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