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01-23-2012, 09:47 AM
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New Track - - Krhyme Ft. Akrid Artz - - - Peep it!
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01-23-2012, 09:47 AM
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01-23-2012, 11:15 AM
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I don't know how long you been spittin on beats for, But you just didn't sound comfortable at all. I aint tryna hate neither, Just sayin.
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I don't know how long you been spittin on beats for, But you just didn't sound comfortable at all. I aint tryna hate neither, Just sayin.
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01-23-2012, 11:18 AM
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not long, switchin to audio now.
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not long, switchin to audio now.
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01-23-2012, 11:19 AM
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Ahhh thats fair enough then
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01-23-2012, 11:19 AM
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Ahhh thats fair enough then
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01-23-2012, 11:25 AM
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Any criticsm/help is welcomed. tryna elevate on the audio side. Its like almost starting from the bottom up.
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Any criticsm/help is welcomed. tryna elevate on the audio side. Its like almost starting from the bottom up.
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01-23-2012, 11:26 AM
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The comfort thing will come with experience anyway.
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01-23-2012, 11:26 AM
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The comfort thing will come with experience anyway.
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01-23-2012, 11:30 AM
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interesting beat choice...K - youre vicious yo, real talk...each track you keep getting better - i cant wait to get this collab going...they only thing i can say is the quality or effect you put on your vocals makes it sound alittle airy - like youre in a big, open room...ither than that yo, your verse was flawless...akrid, you did your thing homie! you remind me of RULE on a track with the presence and punches...you were definitley on-point, but there was one or two instances were you relied too heavily on the pause - its a petpieve of mine, so that stood out - basically im being picky...but good shit you guys - definitely do the beat justice
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ive peeped akrids earlier drops so this is a nice improvement
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interesting beat choice...K - youre vicious yo, real talk...each track you keep getting better - i cant wait to get this collab going...they only thing i can say is the quality or effect you put on your vocals makes it sound alittle airy - like youre in a big, open room...ither than that yo, your verse was flawless...akrid, you did your thing homie! you remind me of RULE on a track with the presence and punches...you were definitley on-point, but there was one or two instances were you relied too heavily on the pause - its a petpieve of mine, so that stood out - basically im being picky...but good shit you guys - definitely do the beat justice
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ive peeped akrids earlier drops so this is a nice improvement
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01-23-2012, 11:38 AM
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Much Appreciated.
Takin everything in, and will get up there soon.
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Much Appreciated.
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01-23-2012, 11:41 AM
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Yeah agree with Frizzle about the pauses, your gonna be mad nice after you get some more under your belt.
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& the first dude was aiight too.
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Yeah agree with Frizzle about the pauses, your gonna be mad nice after you get some more under your belt.
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& the first dude was aiight too.
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01-23-2012, 12:15 PM
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the sibilance was mad noticeable, like me, i take out the center for the vocals can sit. eq that shits out. akrids verse seemed to be on top of the beat. and the delivery was weak. nice rhymes and production tho. krhyme had some heavy verb on his vocal or bad acoustics on the on the room. overall i rate it a 7-8
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the sibilance was mad noticeable, like me, i take out the center for the vocals can sit. eq that shits out. akrids verse seemed to be on top of the beat. and the delivery was weak. nice rhymes and production tho. krhyme had some heavy verb on his vocal or bad acoustics on the on the room. overall i rate it a 7-8
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