Rhyming Scheme/Flow - Catharsis. Cath was alright, but he mainly got it because Strange stretched his lines a little. Shorten them up and it will flow off much cleaner and get to the point quicker.
Vocabulary - Catharsis. Small level above.
Topic/Meaning - STRANGE1. Generic, so was Cath's. I enjoyed Strange's more and the ending really brought the story together.
Storytelling/Progression - STRANGE1. Cath dwelled way too much. There was some unclear moments in STRANGE'S but he kept on topic quite well to take the cat.
Emotion - Cath. Easily.
Imagery - STRANGE1. There was no real images in Cath's and the simple story gace a good image to STRANGE's. I keep picturing Stand By Me lmao.
Poetic Techniques - Cath. A couple metaphors really took this one with ease.
Ending - STRANGE1. I liked how Strange too a with no originality depth and forced it to have both. The "short cuts/cut short" wording was good. Cath's was way too generic and the train coming was obviously a metaphor which was too vague to follow 100%.
GMV// STRANGE1. Tie on the cats, and Cath probably edged the cats on how much he won some, but the cats Strange took hold more weight to me. I liked his story and the ending almost single handedly won it. I think Cath rushed his and was a little too unoriginal using vague emotional moments to dictate a verse. Good contest guys.
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