ATT Round 1: Writer 15 vs. Writer 18 (Writer 15 wins 3-0)

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Writer 15

I wondered where you were going at the start of your verse, especially with the barking dog. Then it all came together really well and the relevance of the dog became apparent, making it a very good read. I thought the language and vocab reminded me of an experienced topical writer and you did a good job with the topic

Writer 18

I thought you took a more direct approach to the topic. Your verse lacked fluency though and never really had any kind of structure to it. There was no storyline to follow. I'd imagine this may have been due to the fact that the topic was a little tricky and needed some creativity to work an angle - which isn't easy. Also, I know you specifically requested that your layout have no influence on that voting, and I never took it into consideration, but you shouldn't have to cap in such a fashion. Your verse should obviously flow without having to prompt people where the rhymes are. I think you ran into a more accomplished topical writer on this occasion.

MVGT - writer 15

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Writer 15

I wondered where you were going at the start of your verse, especially with the barking dog. Then it all came together really well and the relevance of the dog became apparent, making it a very good read. I thought the language and vocab reminded me of an experienced topical writer and you did a good job with the topic

Writer 18

I thought you took a more direct approach to the topic. Your verse lacked fluency though and never really had any kind of structure to it. There was no storyline to follow. I'd imagine this may have been due to the fact that the topic was a little tricky and needed some creativity to work an angle - which isn't easy. Also, I know you specifically requested that your layout have no influence on that voting, and I never took it into consideration, but you shouldn't have to cap in such a fashion. Your verse should obviously flow without having to prompt people where the rhymes are. I think you ran into a more accomplished topical writer on this occasion.

MVGT - writer 15