ATT Round 1: Writer 13 vs. Writer 20 (Writer 20 wins 3-0)

Writer 13 - I thought the story was okay. I'd have liked to see a little bit of a twist on the topic. Perhaps "Memoirs of a Killer" and "Alexey" are references to something, but I didn't find anything in researching so I'll assume not. While the story was a bit generic, you done okay sticking to it. In reading the start of this, I kind of had a feeling you were going to bring it back to the protagonist being Dexter. I haven't even watched the show though lol.

Writer 20 - I thought this was fairly original, but I felt you could have had a bit of mystery about it. You told us right off the bat it was Spider-Man, so that kind of left nothing to the imagination. The story was fairly good, and the rhyming had it's high points and it's low points. For your next verse, try and give us what we didnt expect as a conclusion. Something that is shrouded in a veil of mystery, then bam, it all makes sense now.

Overall - A reasonably close one to call, but I defo enjoyed the second verse more. I felt rhyming wise it was easier to get into and flow with, and I thought the story took a much more engaging and entertaining direction. Close enough though.

GMV - Writer 20

Writer 13 - I thought the story was okay. I'd have liked to see a little bit of a twist on the topic. Perhaps "Memoirs of a Killer" and "Alexey" are references to something, but I didn't find anything in researching so I'll assume not. While the story was a bit generic, you done okay sticking to it. In reading the start of this, I kind of had a feeling you were going to bring it back to the protagonist being Dexter. I haven't even watched the show though lol.

Writer 20 - I thought this was fairly original, but I felt you could have had a bit of mystery about it. You told us right off the bat it was Spider-Man, so that kind of left nothing to the imagination. The story was fairly good, and the rhyming had it's high points and it's low points. For your next verse, try and give us what we didnt expect as a conclusion. Something that is shrouded in a veil of mystery, then bam, it all makes sense now.

Overall - A reasonably close one to call, but I defo enjoyed the second verse more. I felt rhyming wise it was easier to get into and flow with, and I thought the story took a much more engaging and entertaining direction. Close enough though.

GMV - Writer 20