Breaking down my bar against cookup - Lets Beef

**NOBLE** · #2 08-27-2011, 01:10 PM

From the way you wrote it, it's not obvious that you were talking about his bars. The only thing that really stood out is your use of multies (which was great). But the punch isn't apparent.

**NOBLE** · 08-27-2011, 01:10 PM

From the way you wrote it, it's not obvious that you were talking about his bars. The only thing that really stood out is your use of multies (which was great). But the punch isn't apparent.


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