Logikk: You painted a nice picture for me.. You stayed on topic and provide a great read. Vocab was on point.. After reading it, I just knew that your opp had his hands full. I just wish you wouldve stepped up the lyrical aspect of it, and pulled away from making it so poem-ish.. just my opinion tho.
Phroxen: You provided a dope read. I was impressed at the lyrical content.. and how you did not let that distract you from the storyline and topic. Very Nice. The flow factor of it was cool as well. Real dope read..
Both was nice in this one.. After the topic has been nailed.. (to me) it boils down to lyrical content.. and for that
Phroxen gets my vote.
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Last edited by Hubert Cumberdale; 11-13-2013 at 01:15 PM.
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