POST YOUR BEST VERSE, ANDD......

[Erupt da Monsta]

Originally Posted by OSKAR

Going with most recent battle

https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=lb&id=669448

Oskar. you've come a long way audio wise, tracks as well, this was a very solid verse. I thought the punches came back to back, one or two quotables.

The delivery was cool, but thats where it lacked, you seemed to rush the bars and didn't sound as natural as you should, but that just comes with doing more battles. Punch power was good, but could be better. I fuck with the accent, you do a good job at making it understandable.

I'd say overall slow it down a lil, lil more aggression maybe simply turn up the volume. You have the structure down, just need to smooth it out with the transition from bar to bar. maybe add another rhyming multi set from the last multi set/punch before going into the next bar/multi set.

OVERALL I'D SAY YOU ARE A VERY STRONG MIDDLEWEIGHT. AND WITH A COUPLE ADJUSTMENTS COULD BE A HEAVYWEIGHT IN TIME.

[Erupt da Monsta]

Originally Posted by OSKAR

Going with most recent battle

https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=lb&id=669448

Oskar. you've come a long way audio wise, tracks as well, this was a very solid verse. I thought the punches came back to back, one or two quotables.

The delivery was cool, but thats where it lacked, you seemed to rush the bars and didn't sound as natural as you should, but that just comes with doing more battles. Punch power was good, but could be better. I fuck with the accent, you do a good job at making it understandable.

I'd say overall slow it down a lil, lil more aggression maybe simply turn up the volume. You have the structure down, just need to smooth it out with the transition from bar to bar. maybe add another rhyming multi set from the last multi set/punch before going into the next bar/multi set.

OVERALL I'D SAY YOU ARE A VERY STRONG MIDDLEWEIGHT. AND WITH A COUPLE ADJUSTMENTS COULD BE A HEAVYWEIGHT IN TIME.