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Unread 08-05-2013, 03:14 PM
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This nigga makes a thread about the school because i missed one multi that didn't rhyme lol you pawn... Same nigga I bodied in a track diss who's to chicken to respond. GODDAMMNN haha god body? What's the point of this thread? I
U tryna get students to leave?you think I really care if they did nigga I'm here to help..a thread like this smh i could care less if every nigga left the school ., your opinion doesn't matter kid you aren't doing anything cept gettin shitted on tracks.. I'll leave ya thread on this note .. Haha

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Crying when his hats arent FITTING ON HIS PRETZEL HEAD..the words "You were born special" stuck-in-his-brain from one-of-da-days he got a VISIT FROM PROFESSOR X' - Godbody

FITTING ON and VISIT FROM don't rhyme ...
PRETZEL HEAD and PROFESSOR X don't rhyme ...

don't go around spew'n nonsense when you do the same shit you tryna criticize someone else about bro it's not cool at all ...

and this is no hate on you or your craft but don't hate and not help
Lmao this nigga pulse a walkin joke everything he say you be like goddamnnn ha


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Nigga this the final response you get from me, you a joke of an audio cat your Moses back n forth rights have been revoked until I hear a response nigga you scared of beats n that track was light work keep my name out ya mouth lil nigga haha
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This nigga makes a thread about the school because i missed one multi that didn't rhyme lol you pawn... Same nigga I bodied in a track diss who's to chicken to respond. GODDAMMNN haha god body? What's the point of this thread? I
U tryna get students to leave?you think I really care if they did nigga I'm here to help..a thread like this smh i could care less if every nigga left the school ., your opinion doesn't matter kid you aren't doing anything cept gettin shitted on tracks.. I'll leave ya thread on this note .. Haha

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lmaoo at "greatest text/audio battlers to ever graze the website" ... j/k

but on the reall

Crying when his hats arent FITTING ON HIS PRETZEL HEAD..the words "You were born special" stuck-in-his-brain from one-of-da-days he got a VISIT FROM PROFESSOR X' - Godbody

FITTING ON and VISIT FROM don't rhyme ...
PRETZEL HEAD and PROFESSOR X don't rhyme ...

don't go around spew'n nonsense when you do the same shit you tryna criticize someone else about bro it's not cool at all ...

and this is no hate on you or your craft but don't hate and not help
Lmao this nigga pulse a walkin joke everything he say you be like goddamnnn ha


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Nigga this the final response you get from me, you a joke of an audio cat your Moses back n forth rights have been revoked until I hear a response nigga you scared of beats n that track was light work keep my name out ya mouth lil nigga haha
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Lol life's gonna hate lol...not even worth the time, got better things to do.

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lmaoo at "greatest text/audio battlers to ever graze the website" ... j/k

but on the reall

Crying when his hats arent FITTING ON HIS PRETZEL HEAD..the words "You were born special" stuck-in-his-brain from one-of-da-days he got a VISIT FROM PROFESSOR X' - Godbody

FITTING ON and VISIT FROM don't rhyme ...
PRETZEL HEAD and PROFESSOR X don't rhyme ...

don't go around spew'n nonsense when you do the same shit you tryna criticize someone else about bro it's not cool at all ...

and this is no hate on you or your craft but don't hate and not help
Maybe someday when Im good enough @Godbody..I'll be able to rhyme pretzel head with professor x
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Lol life's gonna hate lol...not even worth the time, got better things to do.

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lmaoo at "greatest text/audio battlers to ever graze the website" ... j/k

but on the reall

Crying when his hats arent FITTING ON HIS PRETZEL HEAD..the words "You were born special" stuck-in-his-brain from one-of-da-days he got a VISIT FROM PROFESSOR X' - Godbody

FITTING ON and VISIT FROM don't rhyme ...
PRETZEL HEAD and PROFESSOR X don't rhyme ...

don't go around spew'n nonsense when you do the same shit you tryna criticize someone else about bro it's not cool at all ...

and this is no hate on you or your craft but don't hate and not help
Maybe someday when Im good enough @Godbody..I'll be able to rhyme pretzel head with professor x
 
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Pretzel Head rhymes with Professor X though. that's the thing. this is a slant rhyme

VISIT & FITTING do rhyme. those are also called eye rhymes/slant rhymes

Eminem rhymed MY FAULT & EYEBALL.. they don't rhyme but in a slant they do

if you cant see how VISIT & FITTING rhyme i'll add a syllable before each word...

PAY VISITS...AIN'T FITTIN

however FURNACE & GORGEOUS is so far of a stretch Mr. Fantastic himself wouldn't reach for that bullshit

I didn't say shit about @JimmyDean rhyming BEEN, CHICK, & KID, did I? even though none of those rhyme unless you're slant rhyming

& Yeah I'm one of the greatest to ever graze the site on both sides. I beat niggas that none of ya'll will ever hang with in both text and audio

& I can't do tracks on my laptop & Moses knows this and when I challenged him to a LIVE battle in the chatroom the nigga ran away and made a song about me. I wonder how long that took you. This nigga devoted a few hours of his day to me


I'd wipe the floor with 95% of you buffoons and never think otherwise

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oh and feel free to use my text verses in your rap school @Moses

Sayin ya SHIT’S HOTS-a-HIP-HOP SCANDAL. I’m never gettin beat, u only “meddle with the heat” when you LIFT POT HANDLES! I’m beatin ya silly, I seen ya achilles - like FLIP FLOP SANDALS. I’ll clown you bitch - my battles is where CHRIS ROCK FANS GO to see me kick ass…this Riff Raff vs BIG, PAC, AND HOV..You’re a MASTURBATOR & a PAWN THAT’S SCHEMIN. I showed em all the tricks, he was Roam-in, for a bitch..So he’ll be GLAD HE ATE HER, WHEN I CALL ‘ah SEE EM!(O_O!)/This WORDPLAY RIDICULOUS FIRE. Your VERSE GAME in a FIRST-AID PREDICAMENT, LIAR. You only “pick up skill” when you’re in the DIRT RACIN em MICHELIN TIRES!!!!

^ How many niggas in your school fuckin with that level of skill? That shit reads like a fuckin river. learn to count syllables lil niggas ...& those are light jabs. Worded better than any crock of shit I've seen in your rap school

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Pretzel Head rhymes with Professor X though. that's the thing. this is a slant rhyme

VISIT & FITTING do rhyme. those are also called eye rhymes/slant rhymes

Eminem rhymed MY FAULT & EYEBALL.. they don't rhyme but in a slant they do

if you cant see how VISIT & FITTING rhyme i'll add a syllable before each word...

PAY VISITS...AIN'T FITTIN

however FURNACE & GORGEOUS is so far of a stretch Mr. Fantastic himself wouldn't reach for that bullshit

I didn't say shit about @JimmyDean rhyming BEEN, CHICK, & KID, did I? even though none of those rhyme unless you're slant rhyming

& Yeah I'm one of the greatest to ever graze the site on both sides. I beat niggas that none of ya'll will ever hang with in both text and audio

& I can't do tracks on my laptop & Moses knows this and when I challenged him to a LIVE battle in the chatroom the nigga ran away and made a song about me. I wonder how long that took you. This nigga devoted a few hours of his day to me


I'd wipe the floor with 95% of you buffoons and never think otherwise

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oh and feel free to use my text verses in your rap school @Moses

Sayin ya SHIT’S HOTS-a-HIP-HOP SCANDAL. I’m never gettin beat, u only “meddle with the heat” when you LIFT POT HANDLES! I’m beatin ya silly, I seen ya achilles - like FLIP FLOP SANDALS. I’ll clown you bitch - my battles is where CHRIS ROCK FANS GO to see me kick ass…this Riff Raff vs BIG, PAC, AND HOV..You’re a MASTURBATOR & a PAWN THAT’S SCHEMIN. I showed em all the tricks, he was Roam-in, for a bitch..So he’ll be GLAD HE ATE HER, WHEN I CALL ‘ah SEE EM!(O_O!)/This WORDPLAY RIDICULOUS FIRE. Your VERSE GAME in a FIRST-AID PREDICAMENT, LIAR. You only “pick up skill” when you’re in the DIRT RACIN em MICHELIN TIRES!!!!

^ How many niggas in your school fuckin with that level of skill? That shit reads like a fuckin river. learn to count syllables lil niggas ...& those are light jabs. Worded better than any crock of shit I've seen in your rap school

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Originally Posted by Dissizit View Post
lmaoo at "greatest text/audio battlers to ever graze the website" ... j/k

but on the reall

Crying when his hats arent FITTING ON HIS PRETZEL HEAD..the words "You were born special" stuck-in-his-brain from one-of-da-days he got a VISIT FROM PROFESSOR X' - Godbody

FITTING ON and VISIT FROM don't rhyme ...
PRETZEL HEAD and PROFESSOR X don't rhyme ...

don't go around spew'n nonsense when you do the same shit you tryna criticize someone else about bro it's not cool at all ...

and this is no hate on you or your craft but don't hate and not help
Tbh I just read that line and it rhymed to me. As far as the school. I'm not putting in any input on it. He's using up his own to time to set up all that shit.

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he was Roam-in, for a bitch..So he’ll be GLAD HE ATE HER, WHEN I CALL ‘ah SEE EM!(O_O!)
I agreed that your other bar rhymed..
But that wordplay is forceeeddd like a mothafucker. 100 yoda's couldn't overcome the wordplay in that line.
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lmaoo at "greatest text/audio battlers to ever graze the website" ... j/k

but on the reall

Crying when his hats arent FITTING ON HIS PRETZEL HEAD..the words "You were born special" stuck-in-his-brain from one-of-da-days he got a VISIT FROM PROFESSOR X' - Godbody

FITTING ON and VISIT FROM don't rhyme ...
PRETZEL HEAD and PROFESSOR X don't rhyme ...

don't go around spew'n nonsense when you do the same shit you tryna criticize someone else about bro it's not cool at all ...

and this is no hate on you or your craft but don't hate and not help
Tbh I just read that line and it rhymed to me. As far as the school. I'm not putting in any input on it. He's using up his own to time to set up all that shit.

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he was Roam-in, for a bitch..So he’ll be GLAD HE ATE HER, WHEN I CALL ‘ah SEE EM!(O_O!)
I agreed that your other bar rhymed..
But that wordplay is forceeeddd like a mothafucker. 100 yoda's couldn't overcome the wordplay in that line.
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GLAD HE ATE HER/Gladiator
Colisseum/CALL AH SEE EM

notice I put the AH... AH is only pronounced 1 way..no matter what accent you have

thats how the wordplay wasn't forced

and if you're gonna give me shit about putting AH in there I seen hella people do it

ppl pronounce Coliseum differently...We had this same debate over one of my battles with the pronunciation of TORTOISE and we all agreed

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GLAD HE ATE HER/Gladiator
Colisseum/CALL AH SEE EM

notice I put the AH... AH is only pronounced 1 way..no matter what accent you have

thats how the wordplay wasn't forced

and if you're gonna give me shit about putting AH in there I seen hella people do it

ppl pronounce Coliseum differently...We had this same debate over one of my battles with the pronunciation of TORTOISE and we all agreed

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I'm not talking about the way it sounds..

he was Roam-in, for a bitch..So he’ll be GLAD HE ATE HER, WHEN I CALL ‘ah SEE EM!(O_O!)
He was roman, for a bitch, so he'll be gladiator, when I colisseum.

Doesn't really make sense and reading it that way, make it sound like Switowski from the longest yard wrote that shit. Idk It wasn't the best of worded bars either. I wasn't talking about the pronunciation. People make the actual wordplay work, per say.. Just not work for there verse.

and yes everyone does that shit and I call it out every time because it sounds fucked up. It's become LB's way to see a new wordplay no matter how it's written or how the bar is actually worded and just say it's dope because the wordplay itself was original, when in fact in didn't really work as a whole for their verse.
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I'm not talking about the way it sounds..

he was Roam-in, for a bitch..So he’ll be GLAD HE ATE HER, WHEN I CALL ‘ah SEE EM!(O_O!)
He was roman, for a bitch, so he'll be gladiator, when I colisseum.

Doesn't really make sense and reading it that way, make it sound like Switowski from the longest yard wrote that shit. Idk It wasn't the best of worded bars either. I wasn't talking about the pronunciation. People make the actual wordplay work, per say.. Just not work for there verse.

and yes everyone does that shit and I call it out every time because it sounds fucked up. It's become LB's way to see a new wordplay no matter how it's written or how the bar is actually worded and just say it's dope because the wordplay itself was original, when in fact in didn't really work as a whole for their verse.
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It works for the God.

The wordplay works in the sense that He'll be glad he ate her when I call or see em... Since he was roaming for a bitch and I taught em all the tricks

It wasn't designed to work both ways. I can do that too. It's more of a conceptual wordplay than anything. Romans, gladiators, & coliseums are all related

This fruit shops at Payless, probably buyin PEARS of shoes!

omgomgitworksasgagknafgnagna...so? sometimes the more complex concept >> basic shit that makes sense

& It wasn't worded that good? lol every line matches up with the line preceding it as far as syllable count goes and where the rhymes are

except for the beginning where I added SHITS HOT which was extra syllables but still an extra rhyme. and in the end when I put words in between rhymes like VERSE GAME in a ... and DIRT RACIN em ..

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It works for the God.

The wordplay works in the sense that He'll be glad he ate her when I call or see em... Since he was roaming for a bitch and I taught em all the tricks

It wasn't designed to work both ways. I can do that too. It's more of a conceptual wordplay than anything. Romans, gladiators, & coliseums are all related

This fruit shops at Payless, probably buyin PEARS of shoes!

omgomgitworksasgagknafgnagna...so? sometimes the more complex concept >> basic shit that makes sense

& It wasn't worded that good? lol every line matches up with the line preceding it as far as syllable count goes and where the rhymes are

except for the beginning where I added SHITS HOT which was extra syllables but still an extra rhyme. and in the end when I put words in between rhymes like VERSE GAME in a ... and DIRT RACIN em ..

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It wasn't designed to work both ways. I can do that too. It's more of a conceptual wordplay than anything. Romans, gladiators, & coliseums are all related
i feel that.

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It wasn't designed to work both ways. I can do that too. It's more of a conceptual wordplay than anything. Romans, gladiators, & coliseums are all related
i feel that.

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That is why LB is looked down upon everywhere else.

Cause we enjoy gay shit like
This fruit shops at Payless, probably buyin PEARS of shoes!

When Pears of shoes?? does not make sense.

My main thing which you admitted anyways was that it doesn't work both ways. I guess that's just my own opinion on it. If the wordplay doesn't make sense when its read the other way around, I'd take points off for that.

He'll be glad he ate her when I call or see em
^ and that is what I meant by bad wording.. Call Ah See Em/Call or see em

The overall punch was worded bad..
you basically made a statement saying that you showed him the tricks cause he was looked for a girl and whenever you called or saw em he was glad that he ate her. If it was worded in a way to make fun and diss him okay. But your line was basically a statement in that way, not a punch. and you only wrote it the way you did to use the forced wordplay

Hell I'm sure I have plenty of fucked up lines of my own too. But whatever.

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That is why LB is looked down upon everywhere else.

Cause we enjoy gay shit like
This fruit shops at Payless, probably buyin PEARS of shoes!

When Pears of shoes?? does not make sense.

My main thing which you admitted anyways was that it doesn't work both ways. I guess that's just my own opinion on it. If the wordplay doesn't make sense when its read the other way around, I'd take points off for that.

He'll be glad he ate her when I call or see em
^ and that is what I meant by bad wording.. Call Ah See Em/Call or see em

The overall punch was worded bad..
you basically made a statement saying that you showed him the tricks cause he was looked for a girl and whenever you called or saw em he was glad that he ate her. If it was worded in a way to make fun and diss him okay. But your line was basically a statement in that way, not a punch. and you only wrote it the way you did to use the forced wordplay

Hell I'm sure I have plenty of fucked up lines of my own too. But whatever.

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He'll be glad he ate her when I call or see em
^ and that is what I meant by bad wording.. Call Ah See Em/Call or see em

The overall punch was worded bad..
i feel that.
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He'll be glad he ate her when I call or see em
^ and that is what I meant by bad wording.. Call Ah See Em/Call or see em

The overall punch was worded bad..
i feel that.
 
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