The Rhythm Of My Life(New Track) - Lets Beef

**John Dos** · #1 02-22-2013, 02:39 AM

https://soundcloud.com/dosage904/rhy...fe-rough-draft

All feedback is definitely appreciated!

**John Dos** · 02-22-2013, 02:39 AM

https://soundcloud.com/dosage904/rhy...fe-rough-draft

All feedback is definitely appreciated!

**John Dos** · #2 02-23-2013, 07:15 PM

this is why i hate LB lol

muhfuckas on that text shit missing good ass music

**John Dos** · 02-23-2013, 07:15 PM

this is why i hate LB lol

muhfuckas on that text shit missing good ass music

**FreezyCT** · #3 02-24-2013, 09:24 AM

you drop feed on peoples tracks, they'll be more inclined to return it...treat it ilke the 'fvvb' but with a little more potatoes

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i think i heard this before, but either way good stuff...personally this needs some more energy in the verses...this beat is crazy and gets the listener pumped - keep that going...the chorus is on point, id turn down your punch-ins because they take away from the singing...let that sink it - and have the dubs accent it instead of overpower it

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i see you're digging that CT rap...doms killing it - we have diamonds out here

**FreezyCT** · 02-24-2013, 09:24 AM

you drop feed on peoples tracks, they'll be more inclined to return it...treat it ilke the 'fvvb' but with a little more potatoes

---------- Post added at 09:23 AM ---------- Previous post was at 09:18 AM ----------

i think i heard this before, but either way good stuff...personally this needs some more energy in the verses...this beat is crazy and gets the listener pumped - keep that going...the chorus is on point, id turn down your punch-ins because they take away from the singing...let that sink it - and have the dubs accent it instead of overpower it

---------- Post added at 09:24 AM ---------- Previous post was at 09:23 AM ----------

i see you're digging that CT rap...doms killing it - we have diamonds out here

**John Dos** · #4 02-26-2013, 07:01 PM

this is just a rough draft i have adlibs and echoes and all kinds of shit to spice the verses up more. thanks for the feedback homie i look forward to hitting the studio and dropping that verse on your track

**John Dos** · 02-26-2013, 07:01 PM

this is just a rough draft i have adlibs and echoes and all kinds of shit to spice the verses up more. thanks for the feedback homie i look forward to hitting the studio and dropping that verse on your track

**John Dos** · #5 02-27-2013, 07:04 PM

and yea Freezy Dom is a beast

**John Dos** · 02-27-2013, 07:04 PM

and yea Freezy Dom is a beast


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