My honest opinion.. You started off slow, got better then you got lazy n went downhill. You had minor switch ups that weren't bad then an awful one. My internetz was slow so I couldnt see the time. It sounds like u put to much effort into not putting effort in. If you wana mumble rap or what ever you call it, then stay on beat and have a cool cadence. You have to make up for the lack of energy some how.
I wouldnt drastically switch up your flow in a song unless the beat really gives reason too.
I can link u a few examples of how I do it if u want.
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