Your rhyme scheme was so rigid to visually match the text that you didn't once try and consider what it would sound like being read out loud. Biz's verse flowed well even it was slanted. Text or Audio it doesn't matter, when bars are being brought you have to consider what they will sound like when being read or heard. If I'm reading a text battle and their rhyme scheme doesn't flow well when I'm reading it out loud I'm just going to assume you're a mother fucking ape.
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If you need a fucking example just read through the @
RULE vs @
Real Talk 'Classick at Rhymin' scheme battle.... Read it outloud like you're trying to spit those bars live. Then go back and read your stupidly forced fucking verse OUT LOUD like you are spitting on KOTD and just ask yourself how much of a fucking monkey you sound like