I aint asking to change shit ya can spit the same way ya do right now but dont give someone else a vote down just because they write there bars different
Didnt u watch the video? Rakim rights his bars like this (
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Uqts7htT4-A)
- Bar 1
- Bar 2
- Bar 3
- Bar 4
ya write ur bars like this bar1bar2bar3bar4 which is fine whatever works for u just vote on the punchlines, multi, wordplay and metaphors which is where is counts.
Here is ya style of rapping
http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=480595
Here is Rakim style (my verse)
http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=480524
or
rakim style for both verses
http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=480528