Writer 1:

Your topical verse, was good, the rhyming was also good however the description of the image wasn't as clear as i wanted it to be, the imagery wasnt really working for me which seemed to be your only problem.

Writer 2:

I really liked the variety of vocab and the use of sophisticated words to describe the image, your rhyming was also good.

Winner: Writer 2

Writer 1:

Your topical verse, was good, the rhyming was also good however the description of the image wasn't as clear as i wanted it to be, the imagery wasnt really working for me which seemed to be your only problem.

Writer 2:

I really liked the variety of vocab and the use of sophisticated words to describe the image, your rhyming was also good.

Winner: Writer 2