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#5 08-06-2013, 10:27 PM

I felt that both of these were good in different ways. Writer 1's pacing and flow were really nice for the most part. I felt it started off stronger than it finished but I enjoyed reading it all the way through. The story was interesting and fleshed out reasonably well.

Writer 2 was structured a little more traditionally and it worked with the direction he went. I liked that you took a very different approach than your opponent, this angle you took with the gods was interesting and kept my attention.

Winner writer 1

08-06-2013, 10:27 PM

I felt that both of these were good in different ways. Writer 1's pacing and flow were really nice for the most part. I felt it started off stronger than it finished but I enjoyed reading it all the way through. The story was interesting and fleshed out reasonably well.

Writer 2 was structured a little more traditionally and it worked with the direction he went. I liked that you took a very different approach than your opponent, this angle you took with the gods was interesting and kept my attention.

Winner writer 1

08-06-2013, 10:27 PM	#5
Aggo Guest Voted: 0 audio / 0 text Posts: n/a Mentioned: Post(s) Tagged: Thread(s)	I felt that both of these were good in different ways. Writer 1's pacing and flow were really nice for the most part. I felt it started off stronger than it finished but I enjoyed reading it all the way through. The story was interesting and fleshed out reasonably well. Writer 2 was structured a little more traditionally and it worked with the direction he went. I liked that you took a very different approach than your opponent, this angle you took with the gods was interesting and kept my attention. Winner writer 1