I felt that both of these were good in different ways. Writer 1's pacing and flow were really nice for the most part. I felt it started off stronger than it finished but I enjoyed reading it all the way through. The story was interesting and fleshed out reasonably well.
Writer 2 was structured a little more traditionally and it worked with the direction he went. I liked that you took a very different approach than your opponent, this angle you took with the gods was interesting and kept my attention.
Winner writer 1
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