Post your first battle. Roast yourself.
Jakkel vs remarK (then known as Dude Archaic... wtf kinda name is that)
https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=150440
Ayo it's {DUDE ARCHAIC}-I'm {RUDE TO SPRAY IT}~I could beat you easy cuz even my {INTERLUDE GIVES A STRAY KICK}
yoooo FIREEE. I said my interlude gives a stray kick. Flames.
-To your {SLIM WASTE}~WITH {GRIM HASTE}~You gettin {TRIMMED AND LACED}~When I meet you [FACE TO FACE]~Your gonna [EMBRACE THE MACE]//
Mace? What am I, a fuckin hipster woman in her mid-40's in Williamsburg? Also, I love the distinction of wrapping some multis in regular brackets and others in curled ones. Creative control at its best.
I stay 'BLAZIN'~True to this rap 'TAZIN'~Cuz I rap 'AMAZIN'~Leave you {BROKE AND TIRED}~Showin I {PROVOKE THE FIRE}~You'll have to stay in the 'DAYS-INN!'(motel thinkk)//
What is there to think about? I'm legit sitting here contemplating wtf links provoking fire with staying at the days inn? Are they sorcerers at this motel?
Just too damn sick with 'GRAMMAR'~Always cocked back gun 'BLAMMER'~Take away your carreer and leave you shitted on like 'MC HAMMER'//
mmm. No comment.
I'll {SMACK YA ASS LIKE A G}~Aint afraid to get hurt like im on {JACKASS ON MTV}//I'm that {ALL-COUNTY STUNNER}~My {WHOLE TOWN BE GUNNERZ}~Real talk im takin bitches out like an {ON-CALL-BOUNTY HUNTER!}//***DA ALL DAY*****
I probably thought that last punch was sooo hard. Gotta say, tho... shouting out your own rap name initials at the end in between 8 asterisks'... that was a BOLD move.