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Unread 01-14-2020, 09:18 PM
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Not getting this either. In the first line there's a bunch of random pointless shit capped which will lose points.
This is whats broken about it. Capped syllables that don't rhyme.
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Not getting this either. In the first line there's a bunch of random pointless shit capped which will lose points.
This is whats broken about it. Capped syllables that don't rhyme.
 
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