nigguh you only got 3 battles... ive had 250+... you don't know letsbeef yet... and @
Ab-Stract you're one of the ones doing the shit im talking about!!! you gave better ratings then most but the guy i faced... (even with the lite verse i dropped) was no where near good...
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this is this guys verse...
LISTEN COWARD, flow nice wit a DIFFERENT in COUNTER,
horrible start already while ya "bars drop always ass out," like inmates dropped soap in PRISON SHOWERS
(the prison showers concept is played... i was using them when i was a newb)..cuz this bitch "mixture sweet " like BISQUICK FROSTIN
(didnt hit at all) and "sparring wit me " iz a PREVILAGE BOXING
(?????) but ya "punches come up short "like MIDGETS SQUATIN
(what the fuck does squatting gotta do with punches?)..bOy imma "hitman ", there so reason why GUNS MIGHT BLAM, run in ya 'HOTEL ROOM' " fire rounds" like when drug CARTEL SHOOT & i will leave ya "body fuck in bed " and be out the "door fast" like ONE NIGHT STANDS
(i know i need to work on wording too... but that was horrible).......but fam really quit the murda talk wit FAKE WRITTENS cuz real talk ya effort iz "forced in pussy "LIKE RAPED VICTIMS
(again horrible wording)
Ill even go a step further and critique my own verse with no biases...
yall think this NARC IS CLEVER??? omg... let me PAUSE A SECOND... (smh)...listen kid... you LOST... YOU'LL NEVER, CAUSE this BOSS TO SWEAT PUNK... cuz the only time ya 'handling BARS' IS LEVERS!!!
(took too long to get to the punch and it didn't hit that hard) he's weak... so he never saying BARS THAT HEAVY cuz the only time he 'slinging the white' it's 'pillows in fights' and TOSSING FEATHERS!!!
(again not really a punch rather a jab) this whiteboy's 'mouth filled with black' so him FLOSSING??? NEVER!! me? my BAR'S IS RECKLESS if he says he's HARD... HE'S TRIPPING my 'four will/wheel' leave 'ock surprised' cuz he wouldn't have 'a lot of drive' with a CAR COLLECTION!!!(
(too much filler getting to the punch and the build up could have been worded better)
now unless yall seeing something in dude's verse im not... that should be a W for me...