My winner had some better word play and the delivery was a little smoother, The loser..some lines I didn't get...felt like he was trying to go in the right direction but kinda fell off a lil bit with the delivery. Also the loser had some lines that I'm sure they thought was pretty clever but the poor delivery kinda hindered the effect of them, or could of been re wrote differently to come off smoother. Winner had some nice punches, can't say what they are...but imo they hit a lot harder than my losers punches. Voted, Fair. Do the same.
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