[UhMAZING]

I kinda liked the rhyme scheme of Cron's verse, but it was posted with battle structure.

I liked the vocab on dono's verse. and the flow as nice, also liked the story...

but if you guys are going to "edit" the verses make sure everything is correct.

Cron's, I'm not sure if he edited it to Cap the rhymes or what?..but the caps don't need to be there.

Dono's I don't know for sure why he edited his, but could of went over 1 more time and checced spelling.. I.E. The last line says "String" operation, I think it's meant to say "Sting"

But on some real shit, good shit from both...I had to go with dono though, I liked his flow and vocab and just the all around premise of what he was going with. Voted, Fair.

[UhMAZING]

I kinda liked the rhyme scheme of Cron's verse, but it was posted with battle structure.

I liked the vocab on dono's verse. and the flow as nice, also liked the story...

but if you guys are going to "edit" the verses make sure everything is correct.

Cron's, I'm not sure if he edited it to Cap the rhymes or what?..but the caps don't need to be there.

Dono's I don't know for sure why he edited his, but could of went over 1 more time and checced spelling.. I.E. The last line says "String" operation, I think it's meant to say "Sting"

But on some real shit, good shit from both...I had to go with dono though, I liked his flow and vocab and just the all around premise of what he was going with. Voted, Fair.