[Kiwi Peewee]

Originally Posted by REZN

No offense, man... But, this was kind of meh. You really struggle with natural phrasing when doing schemes, I've noticed. They hurt you more than help.

I agree with this when it’s come to a lot of Rai’s content in the last couple of months, especially his verses with Manny in the tag tourney. This specific cypher I didn’t feel had the kind of forced wording to fit the scheme that I’ve seen elsewhere, and although a lot of parts didn’t feel fluidly natural nothing felt unbelievable, which given it’s a schemed 32 is pretty impressive imo.

[Kiwi Peewee]

Originally Posted by REZN

No offense, man... But, this was kind of meh. You really struggle with natural phrasing when doing schemes, I've noticed. They hurt you more than help.

I agree with this when it’s come to a lot of Rai’s content in the last couple of months, especially his verses with Manny in the tag tourney. This specific cypher I didn’t feel had the kind of forced wording to fit the scheme that I’ve seen elsewhere, and although a lot of parts didn’t feel fluidly natural nothing felt unbelievable, which given it’s a schemed 32 is pretty impressive imo.