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Originally Posted by JayCunic
LOL bro thats one battle I used those lines, and I say my shit outloud as im going in so I get a feel of how it would read for someone reading it, But It's not always super concise and on point. That being said your welcome to challenge me if you have better bars and we can ghet public opinion. you can look at other bars and raps ive done and see that there different I don't do that style every time, so to pick one battle from my 200 plus is kinda weird to be honest, and also why are you looking for approval and shit on someone else's bar? be yourself put your own style and get judged for it. peace  
---------- Post added at 09:09 AM ---------- Previous post was at 09:08 AM ----------
and also, homie I could point out a lot of your bars and random battles an pick out lines I think are lazy, you're not as good as you think you are. and instead of giving real feedback to ME, the one who WROTE IT, you get on a forum and bitch about how my rhymes don't meet the standard... fuck outa here to be honest you weak
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Here's a end line from one of his battles : //all this talk of being a god wit WRITTENS IS QUITE CRAFTY,but if 'someone falls for ya stories',its just the BUILDING IN MIAMI!..// That shit is low hanging fruit and not very good, lazy you can say. Let me think of a disaster and throw a line together real quick. You see how I did that? for the ' lazy' line i had you could of grabbed a good one, not EVERYTHING Hits home with everyone. Ive said my peace, send 32 |
listen bitchmade.. i just so happened to pick one from stuff i saw,it couldve been another person.. i wasnt being personal... and if you read carefully, i asked if runon bars are acceptable now... when i mean lazy, i mean structurally , you couldnt write your bars in such a way to use less words... you really are a dumb fuck.. and btw that miami bar shits on your runon any day of the weak.. you just butthurt because i speak the truth..or you still mad because i choose not to vote on your battle.. at the time.. i aint wasting my time on a 32 here.. if you want to go, send me an 8.. anytime
Man don't wanna 'Swing?' I guess I'll give him an "UNDERDOG..'' cause you 'swinging on a set' the only was I'm 'Under-standing' Ya'll!..They make up 'lil' lies about me, but I just keep it PUSHIN, don't wanna 'give me my 'roses' so I'ma creep like a bandit in this Gardener's BUSHES!!..
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^you dropping bars like this that barely rhyme and talk shit about my miami line...? you a joke fam... pay attention to me if you actually wanna learn something.. i'll be more than happy to help you.. get better