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Well there's different concepts of what does and doesnt flow. The problem with the line you shared is therws so much non rhyming time. You could easily match something like that with some internal rhyming.
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Well there's different concepts of what does and doesnt flow. The problem with the line you shared is therws so much non rhyming time. You could easily match something like that with some internal rhyming.
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