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Originally Posted by Joshua Sowell
I posted an open battle and it was accepted by Bnas. I would like some viewings for the both of us. Vote as you feel. I'm more interested in the feedback to enhance my skills.
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Joshua Sowell vs. Bnas
https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=519343
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I was challenged by The Punisherr and accepted. I believe he may have sent his 8 bars in response to my open battle. I would some viewings for the both of us. Feedback and Honest Votes welcome.
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The Punisherr vs. Joshua Sowell
https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=519345 |
I really don’t feel like explaining everything. It needs work. You need all the basics. Learn about setups, punchlines, multiple syllable rhyme scheme(the reason anything should be bold or capitalize) (only because it helps readers with the flow) , just keep writing, reading watching battles and you’ll get there