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Unread 08-20-2014, 10:39 AM
Soly
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EMCEE A: Low 7.
EMCEE B: Middle 6.
Nick has executed his punches and wordplay better. He was funnier too. Kilos mentioned the broken rhyme in a pretty nice way and he tried to keep it relevant but I feel like he forced some rhyme schemes and lines in his verse. For example "I hope lets beef don't think this QUEER-KAT-IS-SUPER". I think he just said that to rhyme with the following line. Not bad, but he could've used better punchlines. Nick kept punching and that's why he won for me.
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Unread 08-20-2014, 10:39 AM   #45
 
Soly
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EMCEE A: Low 7.
EMCEE B: Middle 6.
Nick has executed his punches and wordplay better. He was funnier too. Kilos mentioned the broken rhyme in a pretty nice way and he tried to keep it relevant but I feel like he forced some rhyme schemes and lines in his verse. For example "I hope lets beef don't think this QUEER-KAT-IS-SUPER". I think he just said that to rhyme with the following line. Not bad, but he could've used better punchlines. Nick kept punching and that's why he won for me.
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