Black Book
I really enjoyed your use of vocabulary and the story telling was also on point, i could visualize everything you said which shows that your use of imagery is very good too, it also related to the image whiich you were writing about, also the rhyming was nice,
HaRizon
your verse was also good, but less complex than black books one, your rhyming was good but i couldnt really picture what you were writing about so the imagery wasnt really there, but overall it is a good piece,
Winner: Black Book
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