Vocab-horizon felt he was a little more complex and the diction was better...
Storyline was close but I gotta actually give that to horizon.. Felt he had the better feel, set the mood with the word choice and summed it up better in the end.. Horizon actually had the better verse on second read , book started off good but seemed like the wording got a little forced trying to force the rhyme .. Horizons word placement and lines were suspect at times but still better, horizon had better metaphors and more memorable lines like the medusa one.. My bad for the quick vote last time I'm on my phone but after really reading and breaking this down...
Vote -horizon
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Yeah horizon was more out of the box, i liked the angle he took... Its close but ones diction took this..100
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