WOW TWO COMPLETELY DIFFERENT APPROACHES TO THIS......
WRITER 6 WOZ VERY CREATIVE I LIKED THA CONVERSATIONAL APPROACH, DID FEEL A BIT STRETCHED AND LONG WINDED AT TIMES BUT VERY LYRICAL AT OTHER TIMES....
WRITER 11 HAD A DECENT STORY I DIDNT REALLY UNDERSTAND WHAT WOZ GOIM ON AT FIRST BUT THEN IT ALL UNFOLDED IN FRONT OF ME, FELT LIKE A LIL JOURNEY lol. I DID LIKE YOUR APPROACH WIT IT BEING LINKED TO SOMEONE DYIN....
ALL IN ALL I ENJOYED WRITER 11 MORE BUT MY VOTE GOES TO WRITER 6 AS I FELT HE OR SHE WOZ MORE LYRICAL WIT THEIR CONTENT AND MORE CONSISTANT THROUGHOUT...... IF WRITER 11 USED HIS CREATIVE IDEAS BETTER HE OR SHE COULD HAVE TAKEN THIS.....
vote = writer 6
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