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Originally Posted by EtH

You would have lost to any decent votes based on what you submitted alone. You can say it's not about the format and it's about the content, but you tell me anyone who's ever had success submitting a book for publishing where he didn't press enter once. It's disrespectful to the reader to make it so horribly laid out. I legitimately wouldn't make it through 3 lines without tuning out. I'd have been surprised if you got a vote, or if you were allowed to even submit that given the line limits. This shit isn't a text battle where you game the system into allowing you to have more lines.

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Furthermore if you actually managed to write that much and have an in any way decent piece you'd be the greatest writer of all time. I'll go out on a limb and say 50% of that verse is extra and unneeded.

EtH, you're smarter than this. Now go draw a picture or something.

There's extra content because half way through it, the event was cancelled. So I'm able to write as much as I wanted to at that point. Why do I have to say the same shit so many times?

I'm done goin back amd forth w you ignorant mufuckas.

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Originally Posted by EtH

You would have lost to any decent votes based on what you submitted alone. You can say it's not about the format and it's about the content, but you tell me anyone who's ever had success submitting a book for publishing where he didn't press enter once. It's disrespectful to the reader to make it so horribly laid out. I legitimately wouldn't make it through 3 lines without tuning out. I'd have been surprised if you got a vote, or if you were allowed to even submit that given the line limits. This shit isn't a text battle where you game the system into allowing you to have more lines.

---------- Post added at 01:29 PM ---------- Previous post was at 01:28 PM ----------

Furthermore if you actually managed to write that much and have an in any way decent piece you'd be the greatest writer of all time. I'll go out on a limb and say 50% of that verse is extra and unneeded.

EtH, you're smarter than this. Now go draw a picture or something.

There's extra content because half way through it, the event was cancelled. So I'm able to write as much as I wanted to at that point. Why do I have to say the same shit so many times?

I'm done goin back amd forth w you ignorant mufuckas.