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when taking a first look at the two verses I thought writer 6 got something big going with those big heading and longer writs. but Writer 4 showed more advance writing in terms of story telling tbh, both tells a story but I feel writers 4 story more especially the second paragraph where it ties it together. seems like he's telling a story from his life. making it real. so writer 4 is my vote, but it was kinda close.
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when taking a first look at the two verses I thought writer 6 got something big going with those big heading and longer writs. but Writer 4 showed more advance writing in terms of story telling tbh, both tells a story but I feel writers 4 story more especially the second paragraph where it ties it together. seems like he's telling a story from his life. making it real. so writer 4 is my vote, but it was kinda close.
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