Los: Honestly, I'm not sure if this just went straight over my head. Your scheming was nice, flow fell off a bit in a couple of places. Overall, this wasn't terrible, but confusing and a bit rough around the edges.
Student: Good verse, fairly straightforward take on the picture until the not-really-a-twist ending. Your flow was on point, but the lack of multis really hurt this piece. Everything about this was solid except that.
MVGT: Student
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