I can see that this battle can go either way..... Comedy vs Deep....
Writer 3
Your story was funny and alarming at the same time...lol... It flowed well and was simple to follow overall. Your flow was more consistent.
Writer 14
It's obvious that this is a interesting concept but the major flaw in it though is the fact that you took so long just to talk about the robot.. The story telling was nice I don't think the flow was a solid. The rhyme scheme wasn't consistent enough.
Vote Writer 3
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