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Unread 11-07-2013, 08:27 PM
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Blocc - Spotted some typo's.. I wasn't feeling your verse. Was put together sloppy from my p.o.v. Vocab wasn't outstanding but neutral. Your consistency was alright to say the least.
Bnas - Spotted some typos as well. Felt your verse was put together better than your challenger..
Your bars had more meaning to it. at times it sounded wack but your ending was pre solid.

& The Winner Is.*Opens envelope*.: Bnas!
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Blocc - Spotted some typo's.. I wasn't feeling your verse. Was put together sloppy from my p.o.v. Vocab wasn't outstanding but neutral. Your consistency was alright to say the least.
Bnas - Spotted some typos as well. Felt your verse was put together better than your challenger..
Your bars had more meaning to it. at times it sounded wack but your ending was pre solid.

& The Winner Is.*Opens envelope*.: Bnas!