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Unread 01-03-2021, 07:51 PM
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Only a fool would look at how many little 8 liners you’ve won against nobodies and think you’re anywhere near decent. People not named Bnas stopped caring about a Top 10 monthly system a long time ago.

And you can’t even begin to say you’ve written anything on my level. This was one of your most recent verses.

Your rhymes are mis placed like a lost watch your TIMING IS OFF.. Missed the blind drop and just "winded up" FINDING A LOSE!!

Where is the punchline with this? There isn’t one. You’re already starting behind the 8 ball in terms of punches in an 8 line battle, and don’t try to use the whole “I’m referring to him missing something blind now he FOUND something” cause that’s weak af anyway.

I ain't saxx with petty gay shit but I'll still BUST ON YOUR ASS QUICK.. You can relax while I spray clips and have you RUSHED TO THE CASKET!!!

I don’t care if you say this ain’t gay, this is fuccin gay, bro. Also, where tf is the punchline yet again?

Face it you stuck with your skills dried up basic as fuck N I don't SAVE MORONS... Only way your "flow would be nice" if you took a fuckin vacation to LAKE HURON!!!

The guy’s name in question is Heron, not Huron, you dipshit. This is entirely irrelevant to your opponent and shows how stupid you actually are. Also MORON/HURON great rhyming dicchead lmao

You must of been "two-tired" to write a decent bar I'll just CALL YOU A BIKE.. So you can GTFO yo rap career on life support now just CRAWL TO THE LIGHT!!!

Two tired? Get it? Cause bikes have two tires? Wow that’s fresh af, bro. Lmao.

This shit is dumpster juice and everyone’s day was made worse by even looking at this garbage. Gtfo of my face.

Yea and you ran out of material years ago obviously, every bar doesn't have to be some masterpiece as long as you're actively writing and taking battles. Some verse are better than others that's the way it goes especially when you just keying up verses like I do. That's your problem you're so scared to actually write something that you just resort to trolling so when people say its trash you can just claim it's a troll.

"Remember six years ago when I dropped that fire bar?!?"

No one gives a fuck about that, you washed up.. burnt out.. you have no motivation to actually be creative anymore and that's sadder than any throw away bar I've written.
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Unread 01-03-2021, 07:51 PM   #37
 
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Originally Posted by Locchart View Post
Only a fool would look at how many little 8 liners you’ve won against nobodies and think you’re anywhere near decent. People not named Bnas stopped caring about a Top 10 monthly system a long time ago.

And you can’t even begin to say you’ve written anything on my level. This was one of your most recent verses.

Your rhymes are mis placed like a lost watch your TIMING IS OFF.. Missed the blind drop and just "winded up" FINDING A LOSE!!

Where is the punchline with this? There isn’t one. You’re already starting behind the 8 ball in terms of punches in an 8 line battle, and don’t try to use the whole “I’m referring to him missing something blind now he FOUND something” cause that’s weak af anyway.

I ain't saxx with petty gay shit but I'll still BUST ON YOUR ASS QUICK.. You can relax while I spray clips and have you RUSHED TO THE CASKET!!!

I don’t care if you say this ain’t gay, this is fuccin gay, bro. Also, where tf is the punchline yet again?

Face it you stuck with your skills dried up basic as fuck N I don't SAVE MORONS... Only way your "flow would be nice" if you took a fuckin vacation to LAKE HURON!!!

The guy’s name in question is Heron, not Huron, you dipshit. This is entirely irrelevant to your opponent and shows how stupid you actually are. Also MORON/HURON great rhyming dicchead lmao

You must of been "two-tired" to write a decent bar I'll just CALL YOU A BIKE.. So you can GTFO yo rap career on life support now just CRAWL TO THE LIGHT!!!

Two tired? Get it? Cause bikes have two tires? Wow that’s fresh af, bro. Lmao.

This shit is dumpster juice and everyone’s day was made worse by even looking at this garbage. Gtfo of my face.

Yea and you ran out of material years ago obviously, every bar doesn't have to be some masterpiece as long as you're actively writing and taking battles. Some verse are better than others that's the way it goes especially when you just keying up verses like I do. That's your problem you're so scared to actually write something that you just resort to trolling so when people say its trash you can just claim it's a troll.

"Remember six years ago when I dropped that fire bar?!?"

No one gives a fuck about that, you washed up.. burnt out.. you have no motivation to actually be creative anymore and that's sadder than any throw away bar I've written.
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