i had a boner before i stumbled on this and you turned my would be cum shots into tears so fuck you for that !! lol
jokes apart, this was a freestyle?
god damn man !! as it is motherly topics are touchy and you touched on the most painful one of them all. her death !! over all i liked the superhuman part and the thugs stabbing and sheels and life part between them the ideas seemed a lil repetitive but ur choice of ur topic and the train of thoughts still had the feel to it but the letter the letter shit turned the whole thing n it's head tbh. That sister and aunt shit was a dope fucking angle !! on a side note a mother may not be as harsh as someof the lines in the letter but for the most part that letter and the overall imagery and story telling was fucking dope imo esp for a freestyle. you should definitely polish this up and put it into a track man !!