very different styles here , enjoyed the reads, both of the writers' rhyming should be a bit more precise consistently, & both didnt really stick to the picture ALL THE WAY throughout. One started off pretty predictable, and it didnt really tie with the ending imo, whereas the other's beginning was stretched and small grammatical issues, ok ending but the lines prior made that predictable. Overall i felt one's verse was more entertaining. vote's to stu. one
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