IMO he should keep his name as Realnezz. Has more of an OG vibe to it.
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Originally Posted by Realnezz
Can someone that's been here for a decently long time tell me what my bars lack the most of? And how to make it better? (I.e if my scheming is bad, how to improve it).
Wanna become the best I can, and figuring out what I need to do better is a step in the right direction imo.
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Using your battle against Baba as example, I honestly really enjoyed your bars as they were all, for the most part, very straight to the point.... That bar with the ten-syllable multi seemed that it
could've been really good as well, that is, if I could have understood it better. Felt that it was slightly forced. I really think you have a lot of the most important shit down, especially writing punches. If anything, perhaps working on your setups so they're even better than they are now. Also, maybe working on your scheming would be good too. I feel like they fluctuate sort of oddly; unbeknownst whether or not this was on purpose because IMO the rhyme schemes seem to be of random execution.