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Unread 03-23-2020, 11:37 PM
B U R D E N B U R D E N is on FIRE! 15+ wins in a row!B U R D E N is on FIRE! 15+ wins in a row!B U R D E N is on FIRE! 15+ wins in a row!
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5 Won / 1 Lost
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214 Won / 110 Lost
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1 Won / 0 Lost
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First thing's first, change the name back to Wolf.

Secondly, more aggression in your bars. Everyone has their own style but at the end of the day, the idea is to diss the person. Bitch made hoe, what the fuck yo broke ass gonna do bout it. Fuck boii ain't no gangster. Use that Bigg K approach.

And sometimes less is more, so cut out unnecessary words to shorten the bar without taking away impact.
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Unread 03-23-2020, 11:37 PM   #2
 
B U R D E N B U R D E N is on FIRE! 15+ wins in a row!B U R D E N is on FIRE! 15+ wins in a row!B U R D E N is on FIRE! 15+ wins in a row!
The Raw Talent
Estimated Skill in Audio: 6.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 6.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 6.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 6.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 6.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 6.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 6.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 6.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 6.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 6.47/10 stars
Ranked Audio Record
5 Won / 1 Lost
Estimated Skill in Text: 6.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.24/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.24/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.24/10 stars
Ranked Text Record
214 Won / 110 Lost
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1 Won / 0 Lost
 
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First thing's first, change the name back to Wolf.

Secondly, more aggression in your bars. Everyone has their own style but at the end of the day, the idea is to diss the person. Bitch made hoe, what the fuck yo broke ass gonna do bout it. Fuck boii ain't no gangster. Use that Bigg K approach.

And sometimes less is more, so cut out unnecessary words to shorten the bar without taking away impact.
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