[SoupErb]

Lol I ain't saying people should do Canibus.. Type up their bars on Microsoft Word and for every second word, right click and find a synonym.. But just have a wide variety of words that could be used.

Like ..

Dave was scared of battling,
He was so scared his bones were rattling..

That's mad basic - some shit an Amateur would say.

Or..

Dave was terrified of confrontation,
Fear consumed him & left his interior rumbling, shaking.

Ok not a very good example.. But it just sounds alot better.
And don't forget, once people read a REALLY basic verse.. Your basically put off for life lol... Nobody wants to read your shit again.. But if there's signs of some sort of Educated Vocabulary, then it has a bigger affect on the reader.

[SoupErb]

Lol I ain't saying people should do Canibus.. Type up their bars on Microsoft Word and for every second word, right click and find a synonym.. But just have a wide variety of words that could be used.

Like ..

Dave was scared of battling,
He was so scared his bones were rattling..

That's mad basic - some shit an Amateur would say.

Or..

Dave was terrified of confrontation,
Fear consumed him & left his interior rumbling, shaking.

Ok not a very good example.. But it just sounds alot better.
And don't forget, once people read a REALLY basic verse.. Your basically put off for life lol... Nobody wants to read your shit again.. But if there's signs of some sort of Educated Vocabulary, then it has a bigger affect on the reader.