Alright, it boils down to this. PARIS had a good idea; he just didn't fully execute it. It was left a little ambiguous. It could have been executed a little better. He had decent rhymes and flow to it, nothing that really hurt him. Then Lizman had good multi's and it was a smooth read. The vocab was good but appeared so randomly with less advanced words surrounding it that you get the feeling he just put it in there to put it in there. From a technical standpoint, he won this battle, but topically, he did not. There was no clear point to all of his rhymes. And a topical is designed to convey a point or tell a story; neither of which were accomplished by him. So while Lizman was better with the devices of a topical, PARIS was better at what is the true essence of a topical.
VOTE: PARIS
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