[Denton]

Originally Posted by M-Rock

I told you a lot of people were gonna be surprised when you showed me those lyrics. For a first track, I was surprised with how comfortable you sounded on the mic.. even though I shouldnt be with your radio show experience.

I was also surprised by a few lines that showed me you couldve went harder in the spots you didnt.

I wasnt surprised, however, with your flow being sporadic for a good part of the verses. With this being your first track it was to be expected. That will come with practice.

Personally I think your track was better than your opponents so that gets you an extra half point

Official Rating: 7

Appreciate it man

[Denton]

Originally Posted by M-Rock

I told you a lot of people were gonna be surprised when you showed me those lyrics. For a first track, I was surprised with how comfortable you sounded on the mic.. even though I shouldnt be with your radio show experience.

I was also surprised by a few lines that showed me you couldve went harder in the spots you didnt.

I wasnt surprised, however, with your flow being sporadic for a good part of the verses. With this being your first track it was to be expected. That will come with practice.

Personally I think your track was better than your opponents so that gets you an extra half point

Official Rating: 7

Appreciate it man