One's topical I felt had a more intricate way of rhyming than what you'll usually see in a topical format. It didn't effect the flow of his topical and it also didn't take away from the topical itself. I felt you brought some fairly good imagery along with it and it told the story nicely.
Other's topical I felt was more regimented and more strict when it comes to rhyme structure and multi usage, which I felt became a crutch over time because it seemed like in the middle to the end that's all it seemed like you were focused on was staying with the rhyme structure and it took away from your topical as a whole. Decent topical, however.
Overall, UhMAZING gets my vote.
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