[ELOH STACKz]

Dog: Solid verse fam, if you were going up against anybody else your probably would have won. But your verse lacked in a few key areas, mainly a hard to follow rhyme scheme & lack of sticking to the topic. You would delve in, & then quickly get off topic which took away from its overall effectiveness. You ran into a buzz saw my dude, Dirty Work's verse was flames. Good shit though, keep writing my dude.

Dirty Work: great drop my nigga, I was really feeling this. Your vocabulary was superior, you stayed on topic throughout the verse & your use of in depth imagery really set you apart from your opponent. I agree with JewFro, sometimes ppl get too cute with their words & it kind of losses some sting, but you incorporated everything well. The ending was a beautiful tragedy. Even in the face if death, their love knew no boundaries. Good shit homie...

Vote: Dirty Work

[ELOH STACKz]

Dog: Solid verse fam, if you were going up against anybody else your probably would have won. But your verse lacked in a few key areas, mainly a hard to follow rhyme scheme & lack of sticking to the topic. You would delve in, & then quickly get off topic which took away from its overall effectiveness. You ran into a buzz saw my dude, Dirty Work's verse was flames. Good shit though, keep writing my dude.

Dirty Work: great drop my nigga, I was really feeling this. Your vocabulary was superior, you stayed on topic throughout the verse & your use of in depth imagery really set you apart from your opponent. I agree with JewFro, sometimes ppl get too cute with their words & it kind of losses some sting, but you incorporated everything well. The ending was a beautiful tragedy. Even in the face if death, their love knew no boundaries. Good shit homie...

Vote: Dirty Work